Is it a good story start? Interesting idea or overused?

I don't think it is a good story. The names are not very good. You make the reader convused with all of the July , June , May , April , August , Sepember , Decemeber. Really who would name there kids that. I don't even think people name cats or dogs those names. I mean May is a normal name but he rest arn't. I think that the baises of the story is alright. But I couldn't finch readying the whole story that you wrote it convused me. And if this was to be publisched no one would read it if they couldn't understand it. Becasue I couldn't. Keep writeing maybe you can get it right.